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a: The comma ~
b: a speed bump
What: "It would make it more interesting, perhaps, but it wouldn't make it smoother -- on the contrary, the comma is like a speed bump, momentarily arresting the flow of the sentence."
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Writer: Copyright
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Date: Oct 11 2013 4:09 PM
# 3987 Critique Analogy
a: The comma ~
b: fresh ground pepper
What: "Maybe it's another testament to the tough economic times we're experiencing. Everyone is so afraid for their jobs, so they're doing everything possible to prove their worth and value to the company. These copyeditors just happen to latch on to the comma as a means to show how valuable they are to the company. To me, the comma is like fresh ground pepper. Sometimes it's necessary. Other times it's just personal taste."
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Writer: Chen
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Date: Oct 11 2013 4:15 PM
# 3988 Critique Analogy
Wrong Comma
a: The comma ~
b: a coffee stain on the shirt
What: "Since public relations practitioners are expected to be expert writers, I am a stickler for grammar, punctuation, spelling and other mechanics. Your written words bespeak your professional credibility and even a misplaced comma is like a coffee stain on the shirt front of your reputation."
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Writer: Sandra M. Nance, APR
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Date: Oct 11 2013 4:15 PM
# 3989 Critique Analogy
Word Herding
a: The comma ~
b: sheepdog
What: "Punctuation was developed as a system to help readers mainly with the groupings of words. I say in Eats, Shoots & Leaves that the comma is like a sheepdog racing about on the hillside of the written word, herding some words together, keeping other words apart. Legal and business documents require clarity above all and punctuation is the main means of achieving this."
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Writer: Lynne Truss
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Date: Oct 11 2013 4:21 PM
# 3990 Critique Analogy
a: The comma ~
b: a period
What: "A coma is what I often drink myself into. A comma is like a period with a tail, which comes when there is a pause in a sentence. A comma is also when you think your lady's pregnant, but in reality, she's just late...it's a period with a little delay built in.
Learn to know the difference. Good grammar, an end to inbreeding and proper dental work will change Sullivan for the better."
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Writer: Followells AA sponsor
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Date: Oct 11 2013 4:26 PM
# 3991 Critique Analogy
METAMIA is a free database of analogy and metaphor. Anyone can contribute or search. The subject matter can be anything. Science is popular, but poetry is encouraged. The goal is to integrate our fluid muses with the stark literalism of a relational database. Metamia is like a girdle for your muses, a cognitive girdle.