a: passive voice ~
b: spilling hot coffee in your lap
What:
"Using the passive voice is like spilling hot coffee in your lap on an unfamiliar road: it forces the audience to focus on other things that the road you are laying out ahead of them."
Useful?
Writer: Randy J. Harvey, Ph.D.
LCC:
Where:
Date: Aug 24 2015 6:32 PM
# 8398 Critique Analogy