a: Topic sentence ~
b: movie review
What: "Remember that this sentence is like a movie preview.If a movie looks boring, you wouldn't want to go to it.
If your topic sentence is boring, no one will want to read your paragraph."
Useful?
Writer: Writing Lady (& Writing Freak)
LCC:
Where: Reference Link Has Evaporated
Date: Oct 16 2013 10:21 AM
# 4098 Critique Analogy