Sour Writing
a: Incorrect verb tense ~
b: lemon juice on a canker sore
What: "Proofer's Eye means that you can never just read for pleasure. The slightest misplaced comma stabs you in the gut. The odd-one-out verb tense is like lemon juice on a canker sore.'
Useful?
Writer: sunshineabroad
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Date: Oct 10 2013 6:42 PM
# 3945 Critique Analogy