My Hair Is Like Long Thin Strips Of Tan Wood

a: My hair ~
b: long thin strips of tan wood

What: "My hair is like long thin strips of tan wood, dangling from my head. My eyebrows are like hairy black caterpillars. My eyes are like dark green M&Ms. My eyelashes are like long black centipede legs." The link is to a writing program. This is sample from the metaphor page. It was on the site,, but now the whole site gone.

Writer: Stephanie Robillard
Where: Reference Link Has Evaporated
Date: Aug 6 2011 11:17 AM

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